tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post7505608369293853209..comments2023-07-01T02:59:42.588-07:00Comments on The Arrested Symphony: Swirl of LiesSayandeep Kunduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-44970761842344127492010-10-31T10:09:49.358-07:002010-10-31T10:09:49.358-07:00Well, one of my friends was strumming guitar the o...Well, one of my friends was strumming guitar the other day..and the seething turbulence of that mystic tune somewhat forced me to write these lines at once..<br />Regards~ SayandeepSayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-53068801210640678662010-10-31T07:35:05.970-07:002010-10-31T07:35:05.970-07:00Great one! Was this one written for a particular o...Great one! Was this one written for a particular occasion?The Wandering Gypsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05499288251026874804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-77497554093054986652010-10-15T09:35:00.955-07:002010-10-15T09:35:00.955-07:00while your eyes smile and cry...you crafted the po...while your eyes smile and cry...you crafted the poem beautifully!Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-37189985529003579632010-10-12T08:06:44.643-07:002010-10-12T08:06:44.643-07:00It's great that you liked it and have started ...It's great that you liked it and have started following my blog.. Thank you so very muchSayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-44771142274099047052010-10-10T08:42:17.365-07:002010-10-10T08:42:17.365-07:00Wow, deep and meaningful poem. Very well written.
...Wow, deep and meaningful poem. Very well written.<br />It'd be better if you avoid ending various lines with "..."<br /><br />My favorite lines would be "Flailing hands reach out to darkness of lightning...<br />Mother's lullaby, forlorn passer-by,<br />Drifting through mindless backgammon..<br />Words fear, tears jeer, faces summon-"<br />Keep writing !Loserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657166853949362273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-13149749909628584622010-09-21T08:58:43.665-07:002010-09-21T08:58:43.665-07:00@Pete Marshal Thank you so very much Pete.. :)@Pete Marshal Thank you so very much Pete.. :)Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-72421745850285363732010-09-21T08:57:51.130-07:002010-09-21T08:57:51.130-07:00@Moondustwriter.. Poet's words have the capaci...@Moondustwriter.. Poet's words have the capacity to heal..while he himself conjures something cathartic out of it... Glad you liked it.. :)Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-38607898383538588402010-09-20T09:29:52.479-07:002010-09-20T09:29:52.479-07:00hi, i enjoyed this, like dustus said
Ogling stars...hi, i enjoyed this, like dustus said<br /><br />Ogling stars glittering<br />Sordid pleasure tinkering<br /><br />great lines....thanks for sharing with One Shot...cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-58483711640503835832010-09-19T18:54:05.860-07:002010-09-19T18:54:05.860-07:00I'm catching pain - the searing kind. Our worl...I'm catching pain - the searing kind. Our world sure knows it's share of it. I know poet's words have the capacity to heal. I'm glad you can write from that raw level.<br /><br />Nicely done for One Shot<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-30486511640598181522010-09-19T02:11:28.857-07:002010-09-19T02:11:28.857-07:00@ninotaziz thanks a lot for this beautiful poetic ...@ninotaziz thanks a lot for this beautiful poetic analysis of my work.. :)Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-12593797545824154482010-09-18T21:02:50.658-07:002010-09-18T21:02:50.658-07:00I sensed suppressed anger
From lies swirling toget...I sensed suppressed anger<br />From lies swirling together<br /><br />Excellent!ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-78017103859702242362010-09-18T11:19:46.307-07:002010-09-18T11:19:46.307-07:00Hey sister, it's been a long time since you la...Hey sister, it's been a long time since you lat commented on my post.. I feel so elated to have your comment.. it feels great you liked the symbolism in it.. thanks a lot.. But why didn't you check the penultimate one??Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-69285765284351047582010-09-18T11:10:18.047-07:002010-09-18T11:10:18.047-07:00Hey sister, it's been a long time since you la...Hey sister, it's been a long time since you last commented on my post.. I feel so elated to have your comment.. it feels great you liked the symbolism in it.. thanks a lot.. But why didn't you check the penultimate one??Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-76477170695701291852010-09-18T09:58:21.907-07:002010-09-18T09:58:21.907-07:00it made me "hmmmm"....good one...full of...it made me "hmmmm"....good one...full of symbolisms and metaphors...Quintessence Of Illusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13006336874023869400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-54067511356379200422010-09-16T10:02:21.302-07:002010-09-16T10:02:21.302-07:00@Eric Thank you :)
@Monkey Man Yes, lies do hurt.....@Eric Thank you :)<br />@Monkey Man Yes, lies do hurt....We are but all lies incarnate ourselves if not the truest ones by any chance..<br />@Jingle Thank you. :)<br />@Shashi Thanks for reading my poem..I'm gonna check out yours soon..:)<br />@dustus Thank you .. :)Sayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-80492764179100449312010-09-16T06:28:37.961-07:002010-09-16T06:28:37.961-07:00"Ogling stars glittering
Sordid pleasure tink..."Ogling stars glittering<br />Sordid pleasure tinkering"<br /><br />Nice musical quality to your poem. Enjoyed it very much and the above lines stuck in my thoughts. cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-22890032082977503372010-09-15T20:46:38.520-07:002010-09-15T20:46:38.520-07:00Enjoyed reading this...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shiv...Enjoyed reading this...<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya.<br />My one shot Wednesday submission is here...<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/08/whispers-of-desires-conflicts-and.htmlShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-41068184306240713782010-09-15T20:31:41.369-07:002010-09-15T20:31:41.369-07:00vivid word,
and lovely said.vivid word,<br />and lovely said.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-29510501887675612332010-09-15T13:50:36.877-07:002010-09-15T13:50:36.877-07:00Lies hurt but also make great poetry fodder. Your ...Lies hurt but also make great poetry fodder. Your One Shot link took me to an old post so I clicked on your masthead to see what else you had. Glad I did.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-79072361074475803372010-09-15T12:28:50.395-07:002010-09-15T12:28:50.395-07:00Indeed, lies do tend to swirl together. Nice One ...Indeed, lies do tend to swirl together. Nice One Shot!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com