tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post3420535181840480633..comments2023-07-01T02:59:42.588-07:00Comments on The Arrested Symphony: Youth-AmnesiaSayandeep Kunduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-88576758637208049622010-12-19T01:48:53.536-08:002010-12-19T01:48:53.536-08:00beautiful wordplay....
End of The Year Awards 4 ...beautiful wordplay....<br /><br /> <a href="http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/12/i-was-pleased-2-beat-flu-december.html" rel="nofollow">End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community</a><br /><br />Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! xxx<br /><br />keep up the excellence,<br /><br />link a poem to our potluck tomorrow, give us the cheers to continue...Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-54010289039309977682010-12-02T09:20:33.571-08:002010-12-02T09:20:33.571-08:00i read this a few times to get it right in my mind...i read this a few times to get it right in my mind...was really good..the following stanza spoke lots to me<br />I saw the smile rising in her eyes<br />As the lousy night sets in her lies,<br />And the dawn peeps through my starving pupil<br />As the crystal night spilled off her cries.....<br /><br />cheers<br /><br />peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-37322084912472134182010-12-01T21:43:26.987-08:002010-12-01T21:43:26.987-08:00Lovely play! the change up in rhyme scheme is int...Lovely play! the change up in rhyme scheme is interesting, adds flavor to the piece.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-83789276708309413722010-12-01T20:22:03.097-08:002010-12-01T20:22:03.097-08:00Gosh!! What an amazing play of words!!
You've...Gosh!! What an amazing play of words!! <br />You've beautifully expressed the change in colors of the days, and with it, the changing emotions, the changing feelings within.. <br />Stunning!! Loved the rhymes too!! <br />Kudos, Sayan!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com