tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post3240535548742590757..comments2023-07-01T02:59:42.588-07:00Comments on The Arrested Symphony: Frail and ConcreteSayandeep Kunduhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-48305560907326292082010-12-08T08:36:09.530-08:002010-12-08T08:36:09.530-08:00this was powerful. it sounded like an abstract pai...this was powerful. it sounded like an abstract painting of poverty- social or moral.<br /><br />trisha<br />mydomainpvt.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-86854629026220876272010-12-07T13:49:59.112-08:002010-12-07T13:49:59.112-08:00Vivdi.. and very moving! Your amazing wordplay has...Vivdi.. and very moving! Your amazing wordplay has cast a bright light upon this grey world.. it's stunning really!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-80999900933873308652010-12-07T07:30:39.758-08:002010-12-07T07:30:39.758-08:00Glad to Land at your fantastic poetry land today,
...Glad to Land at your fantastic poetry land today,<br />How are you?<br /><br />Love your poetry talent, Please join us at Jingle Poetry Monday potluck today,<br />First time participants can link in 1 to 3 old poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!<br /> <br />Happy Tuesday/Wednesday! <br />Hope to see you in.<br />xxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-38594382426388406322010-12-04T10:42:17.177-08:002010-12-04T10:42:17.177-08:00Dear TAS: I'm feeling a gloomy sensibility; a ...Dear TAS: I'm feeling a gloomy sensibility; a long-suffering moodiness which reflects the romantic poet's heavy heart. As who else shall don an artist's heavy mantel of authenticity "as it is" philosophy? Words flow well and amply formed within the stark realism, the film noir drama. Gives much insight into the plight of the poor,yet offers no help or hand up; thus very doombastic! Powerful.chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-20064872609296359202010-12-02T19:24:53.656-08:002010-12-02T19:24:53.656-08:00you are represented as fresh poets to explore, yet...you are represented as fresh poets to explore, yet not a participant until you place your entry in…<br />You are invited to attend poets rally week 34, read the agreement and place your link in when you are ready, have fun! Poetry awards are given upon participation on or by Sunday.<br />Happy Friday!<br /> <br />http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/thursday-poets-rally-week-34-december-2-8/Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-30078858379667724492010-12-02T15:42:49.019-08:002010-12-02T15:42:49.019-08:00What would it be like if all was the exact opposit...What would it be like if all was the exact opposite? Your tale is very sad but beautifully expressed.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-63973345603106884232010-12-02T06:38:34.004-08:002010-12-02T06:38:34.004-08:00Raw and tragic. Well done.Raw and tragic. Well done.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-69789719338508129692010-11-30T01:12:58.803-08:002010-11-30T01:12:58.803-08:00@ Nance marie
I am so touched nancie..
Thank you s...@ Nance marie<br />I am so touched nancie..<br />Thank you so very much<br />Love and Regards~ SayandeepSayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-71253631307455131742010-11-29T15:26:03.938-08:002010-11-29T15:26:03.938-08:00it is everywhere
listening
this care held back
wai...it is everywhere<br />listening<br />this care held back<br />waiting<br />to be seen by man<br />watching<br />every closed heart<br />speaking<br />a quiet whisper<br />of LoveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-41598126506027932962010-11-29T09:09:24.327-08:002010-11-29T09:09:24.327-08:00Thanks a lot friends. :)
Love and Regards~ Sayande...Thanks a lot friends. :)<br />Love and Regards~ SayandeepSayandeep Kunduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994989880361627406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-30824314908736255622010-11-29T01:56:52.393-08:002010-11-29T01:56:52.393-08:00Great write, full of vivid imagery and emotion.
A...Great write, full of vivid imagery and emotion.<br /><br />Anita.Anita Magdalenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759774477028333590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-35359738285020444352010-11-28T17:07:34.243-08:002010-11-28T17:07:34.243-08:00"Empty pail full of lies and stale rice of ye..."Empty pail full of lies and stale rice of yesterday morning"<br /><br />wow -- this whole poem is powerful<br /><br />And are we? All listening?<br /><br />Really?<br /><br />Great take on the photo.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-46787689537325546122010-11-28T14:50:15.625-08:002010-11-28T14:50:15.625-08:00I love the sounds I hear in this piece and the las...I love the sounds I hear in this piece and the last word is so apropos - Listening<br /><br />if only we did<br /><br />Thanks for the One Shoot<br /><br />moon Smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-69900356603331501982010-11-28T14:25:22.278-08:002010-11-28T14:25:22.278-08:00Images are very striking, pulling the reader where...Images are very striking, pulling the reader where they may not want to follow, eyes open to the squalor of yesterdays.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-8543043621427541132010-11-28T14:04:05.411-08:002010-11-28T14:04:05.411-08:00A good array of imagery, very striking, in conjunc...A good array of imagery, very striking, in conjunction with the prompt - it captures it, in all the despairing nature of the thought. Potent stuff - nice work.Chris G.http://cianphelan.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-86259294246961420812010-11-28T12:17:05.143-08:002010-11-28T12:17:05.143-08:00Great take on the photo. Loved it. Very rich image...Great take on the photo. Loved it. Very rich imageryAdam Common, Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18294782717721438633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-34940307592806657062010-11-28T08:13:55.213-08:002010-11-28T08:13:55.213-08:00It's a symphone of despair. And do we listen o...It's a symphone of despair. And do we listen or do we try to change the music? Really like this.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-69920958795172780592010-11-28T07:25:35.854-08:002010-11-28T07:25:35.854-08:00I enjoyed reading your poem as well, you draw a pi...I enjoyed reading your poem as well, you draw a picture with your wordsKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-43868760431124488682010-11-28T06:21:38.584-08:002010-11-28T06:21:38.584-08:00enjoyed your creative take on the photo. A great d...enjoyed your creative take on the photo. A great deal expressed through your lines, presenting an array of imagery to go with your statement. cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5610142891997517785.post-63915666065452049912010-11-28T06:11:01.445-08:002010-11-28T06:11:01.445-08:00i liked the
..Beguiling despair has painted saffro...i liked the<br />..Beguiling despair has painted saffron on blue tinted royalty..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com